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Rd Ashes 5th Aug 2015, 11:55 AM edit delete
Rd Ashes
Incidentally, the language that the Dyerin speak is called "Ahilian". To the people from Earth it sounds light and almost musical. Something like what we imagine an Elvish language to sound like.

If you see grey speech bubbles, assume they are speaking Ahilian. It's the common language spoken by everyone in The Line.
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MadJak91 5th Aug 2015, 12:18 PM edit delete reply
Aliens are always bad guys :(

Is he emitting the energy she is drawn to so he can capture her?
I have no idea how do you come up with all these cool names :D

This had a previous version?
Rd Ashes 5th Aug 2015, 1:02 PM edit delete reply
Rd Ashes
Hahaha, yeah, that's exactly what he's doing.
So pleased that you picked up on that! :-D

There sure was a previous version. Almost 60 pages.
It's ALL being revamped and reordered to flow better and tell the story more smoothly.

Thanks, about the names. You're much better at it though. ;-)
sigpig 5th Aug 2015, 1:13 PM edit delete reply
Rd Ashes 5th Aug 2015, 1:26 PM edit delete reply
Rd Ashes

In the last panel he glances off to the side to make sure no one is watching.
Creepy. :-P
TheSilentSilence 13th Dec 2015, 2:06 PM edit delete reply
Stranger Danger Selena! These kids, I hope her parents taught her well. :p
Rd Ashes 13th Dec 2015, 7:14 PM edit delete reply
Rd Ashes
As it turns out, no, they didn't.

Lucky for her it turned out ok. Sort of.