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Rd Ashes 11th Feb 2016, 8:35 PM edit delete
Rd Ashes
Ok, I figured I'd add this page now, before my Valentine pin-up on Sunday!

I love me some awkward flirting.
;-)

So, Valentine's Day pin-up goes up Sunday and comes down on Tuesday when I post my regularly scheduled update to this storyline.
Four updates next week!



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sigpig 11th Feb 2016, 9:12 PM edit delete reply
sigpig
See everyone? Hot women are turned on by brains!
I like this more relaxed Khy...

One thing that seems a little distracting (to me) is the "lip liner" effect you create. I don't know if blending it in more would help, but no worries if it doesn't...
Rd Ashes 11th Feb 2016, 9:27 PM edit delete reply
Rd Ashes
I guess Khy was kinda uptight in the earlier scenes, huh?
XD

Edited the pageā€¦ you like that better?
sigpig 11th Feb 2016, 9:36 PM edit delete reply
sigpig
That was quick! Actually, it looks much more natural (to my non-art eye).
Rd Ashes 11th Feb 2016, 9:46 PM edit delete reply
Rd Ashes
Yeah, once you pointed it out it was kinda blinding.
You know, sometimes you stare at something too long and don't see it anymore.
It was an easy fix.

Thanks for the help.
:-D
lirvilas 11th Feb 2016, 10:40 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
Huh

1) Zap a dude
2) Have him cover for you
3) Go on date

Selena leads a charmed life.
Rd Ashes 19th Feb 2016, 9:59 PM edit delete reply
Rd Ashes
Hahaha, I know.
As it turns out though, Khy's a bit of a sucker for her.
I don't think it would have turned out so well if she hit Tyoe or something.
lirvilas 19th Feb 2016, 10:13 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
I would remind the audience of Dyerin marriage practices... she might as well have hit Tyoe!
Rd Ashes 19th Feb 2016, 10:52 PM edit delete reply
Rd Ashes
Hahaha, that's addressed in the last page of this chapter.
And endlessly amusing for me, since Tyoe doesn't particularly like Selena.

XD
Smilocide 11th Feb 2016, 11:35 PM edit delete reply
Smilocide
Preeow, Selena. Get on it, girl! These past couple pages have felt pretty Valentiney already, though I suspect the Valentininess won't stop with awkward flirting!
Rd Ashes 19th Feb 2016, 10:01 PM edit delete reply
Rd Ashes
I think you suspected right.

;-)
MadJak91 12th Feb 2016, 8:31 AM edit delete reply
MadJak91
Real smooth, Khy.
He does not waste much time :O
Boy has GUTS!

Maybe that is how Selena "tests the waters". Makes you take an early hit :D
Rd Ashes 19th Feb 2016, 10:00 PM edit delete reply
Rd Ashes
I don't know how I missed this comment before, but yes, you're right, apparently they don't waste much time!!!

:-D
Stever 12th Feb 2016, 9:34 AM edit delete reply
Stever
Just let her pay you back for god's sake. :O
Rd Ashes 19th Feb 2016, 10:01 PM edit delete reply
Rd Ashes
LOL!
XD